Hello Frank,
I have basic issues with the form itself, insofar as it doesn't hold a candle to the "pillar" forms, which are already laid out with full and properly ordered clarity of principle, to be broken down, utilized, or reconstructed based on the qualified individual practitioner's specific training needs...
However, you have asked for an objective critique, so let me offer you this much. I see here that you are representing it in it's "building" phase, and not "release", so it's looking quite well-grounded at that pace...
To be perfectly honest, with the quality of power, leverage dynamics and gate control you show through this form, and without unnecessary superfluous techniques added in, I can say for the first time in my
entire career that you are making it look like something that actually might be worthwhile to practice!
Best,
Michael